Beyond Almighty

An amazing story, I like how th Mc is overpowered and how he can do things at will, he isn’ restricted by things like a system, and for the women in his harem he doesn’t keep them as useless flower vases, he helps them get stronger. Over all it’s a great novel

Your novel is top tier, one thing though. You cover betrays you, other than that we Gucci.[img=coins]
Everyone suppose this guy, he's trying his best to post chapters for you to view.

I need to improve my writing and the transitioning between characters and knowing when to stop and start sentences , over all I think the plot would be good because I have a plan but I need Improve on my writing style .

My first time reading such a writing style.
The concept is really good, but I feel like the execution hasn't gone properly,
There are far too many explanations rather than character interaction, it feels like just reading a paragraph than an interactive novel.
Other than that, the s*x scenes are very well written(yeah...I enjoyed them), it seems like the author has very good experience in it! Just kidding.
Looking forward to the next chapters and will definitely come back to read it.

a good book with a lot of potential .just change ur writing style a bit .

Amazing book , with clear and vivid narration about the situations and environment. Continue your hardwork author!

Amazing writing style and well executed story. Clearly a work of art.
Definitely recommend to anyone reading this comment.

This novel is amazing there’s a balance between  the sexual and normal content, the grammar has no problems, but the storyline needs improving, over all an brilliant story