This book is awesome ? you totally killed it Author ? by the end of the first chapter I was already drawn to the world of Mirabella and Michal. I felt compelled to read more about them without feeling rushed. If a writer could achieve that then you deserve accolades. Good work Author.
So the novel lies in the synopsis and it gets confusing using weird statements like the Cantonese school and kendama body and doesn’t bother explaining either of those and when it says this is 10k return system that will give only 2 times rewards it doesn’t make sense
This is one of better urban novels.PRos:- MC does not have harem. -MC is not stupid af and arrogant like in other novels-Characters have life and not just used for Mc to step up. -Story is interesting and has huge scope to expand. Cons:-Mc cares too much about things-Mc is not enough ruthless towards women as he should be, come on man u r supposed to be a villain. -stupid army building by MC which is irrelevant in long run.
Not bad, but nothing new. You'll be basically reading 'The King of Battlefield' and 'Reincarnator'......................................................................
I’ve read until about chapter 30. So not especially far. As the author warned, if you can’t handle LGBT, you won’t want to stick around. 30 is a point in the story where the focus seems to be more on LGBT issues than the story. I can handle, and even like stories with Yuri. Yaoi is out of my comfort zone, and that’s where I have to draw the line. The writing (w/o the LGBT agenda) is top quality, and if you can push past that, it is a great book. Sad to say that I won’t be continuing though.
This story is the greatest thing I've ever read. the only fault in the story Is some slight grammatical and proofreading errors. I've been bingeing this novel for 36hrs now with no regrets. Congratulations Pancakes Witch I am officially obsessed with your work.
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