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Hey everyone me again with tge next Review I just picked up on this Gem 2 days ago and what can I say? I swallowed it like a thirsty man in the desert the sweetes water. But why only 4 stars you aks? Well let's se. Translation Quality:5/5-Finally!! A translator who puts the notes ad the end of the chapter and not inbetween them ugh hate that. Thank you alot for it! Also the Overall Qualität is amazing thanks to the Editor Update Stability:5/5-No problems the last 2 days (haha) so 5/5 because from my standpoint it is perfekt will change it if the future shall show me wrong Story Development :4/5-hmm it drags a but here and there also some *power ups* are a bit out of nowhere but overall a lot better than some of it's Pers Char designe:3/5-saddly the only good/bad thing the char designe is confusing in the starting chapters and nothing special or note worthy later one solid standart rating. World Background :5/5-I love this world I really do just for this I would reread it. It is savage brutal and really a world where the Strong raign suprem something claimed by a lot of other novels but never achivte. Oberall:4/5Give it a shoot you will not be dissapointed. (sidenote: writing this on handy with german dictonary so my english sucks atm sorry will fix it weekend when I am back home again)
This novel is amazing i read it before in arabic till ch150 and now I can't miss the chance to read it again .The mc isn't OP ,the plot is unpredictable but make sense, the world building is 5 star and u will get shocked as every thing reveals itself as the story develop You can't miss this great work , give it a chance
I've had time to think about this story, and quite simply it just isn't very good. would you sacrifice almost everything else for :comedic: bits and pieces? (and I say pieces very literally here as most times that's all it is; pieces of)I see all the reviews about; "don't take it seriously or you won't have fun!" but when the actual story itself brings the reader out of that mindless popcorn fest with its own disregard for even a basic standard of bookkeeping it goes a little beyond the pale.see, I have no issue 'turning off my brain' if that's the kind of novel it wants to be, but it needs to be very careful with its own internal bookkeeping, so I don't actually have to be worried about it myself. that's the state of play a story like that has to bring to the table.it has to be consistent, and, ultimately, it has to be largely funny and fun. I, personally, think the story fails to do so, and it's all the worse because of the rest of the issues that fall by the wayside as a result or because of this idea that one doesn't need to care about the rest making sense or working so long as one or two things is done serviceably.but what do I know, right? 1800+ ratings and a 4.54/5 overall at this moment, it's gotta have something to it, right? maybe you'll see something I didn't, maybe it's just not to my taste, maybe I should ask myself why I pushed so hard to like this story? I read more chapters than I would normally do...
Another great work from our very own woundy. You can except thrilling and breath-taking adventure, which won't get boring any time soon.Good luck on WSA 2022!
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