I like it.It has That nice DC vibe to it i hope you dont Drop it.You could probably fIx the grammar up and make some spaces with the paragraphs.Overall its good
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Pretty good some details that me as a reader would like to have are skipped but has lots of potential. For example ( visuals are severely lacking about the Mc, his female partner, his weapons etc.)
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