You can tell that the author has put a lot of thought into this story. I love the prologue. It kind of reminds me of Ready Player One mixed with classic fantasy. Can't wait for more!
Not a professional breakdown of anything but here is what I think.So boring. Granted I didn’t read much, and maybe it gets better, but what I did read started to bore me quickly. The start of a story should be the good but with it getting stale towards the end, but this was just tedious to read. The idea is cool, and if it was done well it could of been good, but it wasn’t. The MC was pathetic, and there were at least two plot holes. Arthur was supposedly amazing, yet he wasn’t even that good. Supposedly 80% of households watch people play, yet the MC didn’t even know the basic rules of the game. Didn’t make sense to me, I’ve never played some games yet I know how to play them. Another thing, who would just allow a spirit to control your body. It would be horrifying, imagine it. Not being able to control what you do, just being a passenger in your own body. It’d scare he **** out of me. Last thing I’ll mention is that Arthur wanted to create an unbeatable sword art, yet didn’t immediately try and teach his sword art to the MC. That didn’t make sense to me. Having another person well versed in your sword art would allow you to see flaws in it. Just my opinion, and I’ve only read about 20 similarly themed novels.
A very unique approach to storytelling with a nice personal touch. The author has seamlessly blended politics with history and created a realistic and gritty world.
This is great so far but please stop making the mc afraid of the Tang girl it's sad to see he need to man up many she can help him find his mother but I think ur building by there relationship it seems like she the reincarnation of the girls he saved maybe she still died I don't no but I hope it's the case thanks for the hard work
She inwardly cried for the loss of her system money. She looked at her shaking palms, thinking, and 'It was 5 Million back then… 5! In just a short span of years, it reduced to these mere 29,025 Rubies?! My babies…'
Quillian chuckled, "Those things are the Earthly form of a Morphling. They feel on your souls." Dario knelt down, "Do you know how to fight them?" Quillian laughed, "There's no fighting them. You can try to run away, or fight until the sun comes up." Dario grunted, then looked at me, "Stay here." He stood and ran to his fellow warriors. I could hear him telling them what was going on with the Morphlings.
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