Read till 55 chapters.Better than 90% same genre WNs.InterestingIt still lacks some thingsLike Fast paced , Fewtimes dialogue breaks immersion and character depths are lacking but good enough.Then world building and power scaling are okayish.I like your Villainess novel more.I would recommend you Young Master's POV.In that novel Character interaction, depths and power scaling are top tier with decent world building and good pacing depending on situation.Well good work.
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