A good novel! The spelling mistakes are minimal, the chapters arent too short, the update stabIlity is great, the world background is clear! The only downside is that privilege chapters are early.
Overall, i recommend this novel for people to read :)
A surprisingly well-planned novel. I was reading through the comments of some Chinese carbon copy and happened upon a comment that said "Rating this 5 stars because at least it's better than my own story.", where I decided to take a look and ended up reading over 40 chapters before I even realized what was going on. Caught my attention at the unique setting and plot and dragged me through the story by the leash.
To the author, you shouldn't belittle yourself despite how good your story is. I have high expectations for you.
(Inb4 I'm thinking about a different author and clicked on the wrong profile. That'd be hella embarrassing LOL. Either way, this was a good read, and I'm planning to continue after I finish off some of my older stories.)
Author here!
This review is going to be different than my first review.
talking about the ratings above,
•the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers!
• the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol.
And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong.
Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong.
• character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope", each important side character will get their times to shine as for mc, he will be like your dating partner, who you will get to know slowly over time. his last may be revealed at times other times, you will get to see how he changed.
• World Background (First): Its a merged world as for the world where mc is from, I have taken every step possible to demolish it, baby...while the new world is divided into four zones, and each zone has countless mountain ranges (read the novel to know further
In a previous review I criticized the description of the story since it was not very good. However, since then the author has changed the description to be much better. I have deleted my previous review.
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
This is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!
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Overall, i recommend this novel for people to read :)
To the author, you shouldn't belittle yourself despite how good your story is. I have high expectations for you.
(Inb4 I'm thinking about a different author and clicked on the wrong profile. That'd be hella embarrassing LOL. Either way, this was a good read, and I'm planning to continue after I finish off some of my older stories.)
This review is going to be different than my first review.
talking about the ratings above,
•the writing quality: maybe average at the start but even there I have tried my best to deliver every sentence in a way that will be understandable for my readers!
• the story development: is slow but you won't find many holes unless you are urging for one...lol.
And if you are thinking that, "Oh another cultivation novel where the mc is gonna be getting treasures left and right and his training will end in the blink of an eye" then you are half right and half wrong.
Also from the name of the novel, some may think that the end is known, then you are very wrong.
• character design: hehe my fav part....the character story for every character won't take place on the spot...(like hi I am wu shi from the shi clan and I am this, while my dad is that and my fiancee is bla bla bla), "nope", each important side character will get their times to shine as for mc, he will be like your dating partner, who you will get to know slowly over time. his last may be revealed at times other times, you will get to see how he changed.
• World Background (First): Its a merged world as for the world where mc is from, I have taken every step possible to demolish it, baby...while the new world is divided into four zones, and each zone has countless mountain ranges (read the novel to know further
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
This is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!