Hello everyone, author here, finally writing a self-review to promote my novel.
This is my first book, and I must say I am finding it more and more fun to write and make the stories in my heard and in my life that I have experienced either through myself or through the people that surround me come alive for you.
I always wanted to write a book like Haruki Murakami - a very realistic yet at the same time tackling some profoundly deep psychological issues, problems in relationships etc.
There are so many messages that I am trying to convey through this book to the readers and I thought what's the better way of doing that than writing something inspired from my own very life.
I am very humbled by the response and will continue to be stable and steady with my writing.
I also want to apologize to the readers again for not being able to write more than 3 chapters per week. I am a teenager and I have a lot of other things to do, plus writing and editing alone take around 3 to 4 hours of my time. Not only that, I have to plan out the story in advance so that the novel remains consistent or get better as it progresses, develop backstories and stuff so that I have an idea on where I am taking my characters to. I don't want to lose focus on any character at all. All of them deserve focus and a role to play in the story, even if it's a minor role.
A realistic story with heavy themes like bullying, depression, loneliness, insecurity, love, hatred... And just so much more to come... A story like that? You have all of my support - if executed properly.
The first 4 chapters are magnificently written, albeit with a few minor errors here and there. The story looks really promising considering the title of the story.
It states that the story is inspired by the author's real life. That would allow the author to give a moral message to their readers. I hope they succeed in whatever message they're trying to send.
All the best! I'll write more reviews as the story progresses.
Also, I really love and hate cliffhangers, really just makes me wanna read all.
This is dope..
Everytime the curiosity to read the next chapter peaks..
I'm literally attached with this novel emotionally..
One of the best novel I've read till now..
The best thing about this novel is - It is based on real life.. That makes it realistic ♥️
Story seems interesting af..
Characters are mysterious and awesome ♥️♥️♥️
Thanks to the writer for giving us this master'addictive'piece ♥️♥️
Only 7 chapters in and it's already becoming one of my favourite stories.
The only thing where this story lacks is in the proper structuring of words and sentences but there, I can't blame the author as they are working without any editor and as the apology chapter says, English is not their first language.
The story is magnificently written so far. I can already see a lot of themes like depression, loneliness, insecurity, despair, societal prejudices, parental themes, abuses, possessiveness and a lot more to come.
Characters are extremely great so far. I can see all of them getting attention and focus and for me, characters matter the most!
This story is getting more and more interesting after the introduction of a really mysterious character.
Only 6 Chapters out and I have already become a fan of it. I have seen many movies and shows on bullying and I thought that this story must be about bullying as well, however when I read that the story is inspired from the author's real life, I knew I had to read it and boy I am so glad I did.
It has a very likeable cast of characters with my favourite character being Vansh and Reyansh is relatable to an extent. The inner monologues add so much depth.
The last three chapters have been 10/10 in my opinion. I just wished the author wrote at least one chapter per day because then it might have had been picked up by the Webnovel and the author would have started to earn.
I understand that the author is a teenager though and that he has a lot of things to do plus writing a story like this might require a lot of effort.
I wish all the best to the author. I hope he becomes successful!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Popular Reviews
This is my first book, and I must say I am finding it more and more fun to write and make the stories in my heard and in my life that I have experienced either through myself or through the people that surround me come alive for you.
I always wanted to write a book like Haruki Murakami - a very realistic yet at the same time tackling some profoundly deep psychological issues, problems in relationships etc.
There are so many messages that I am trying to convey through this book to the readers and I thought what's the better way of doing that than writing something inspired from my own very life.
I am very humbled by the response and will continue to be stable and steady with my writing.
I also want to apologize to the readers again for not being able to write more than 3 chapters per week. I am a teenager and I have a lot of other things to do, plus writing and editing alone take around 3 to 4 hours of my time. Not only that, I have to plan out the story in advance so that the novel remains consistent or get better as it progresses, develop backstories and stuff so that I have an idea on where I am taking my characters to. I don't want to lose focus on any character at all. All of them deserve focus and a role to play in the story, even if it's a minor role.
The first 4 chapters are magnificently written, albeit with a few minor errors here and there. The story looks really promising considering the title of the story.
It states that the story is inspired by the author's real life. That would allow the author to give a moral message to their readers. I hope they succeed in whatever message they're trying to send.
All the best! I'll write more reviews as the story progresses.
Also, I really love and hate cliffhangers, really just makes me wanna read all.
Anyway i hope rin would be reyansh's bf someday
Everytime the curiosity to read the next chapter peaks..
I'm literally attached with this novel emotionally..
One of the best novel I've read till now..
The best thing about this novel is - It is based on real life.. That makes it realistic ♥️
Story seems interesting af..
Characters are mysterious and awesome ♥️♥️♥️
Thanks to the writer for giving us this master'addictive'piece ♥️♥️
The only thing where this story lacks is in the proper structuring of words and sentences but there, I can't blame the author as they are working without any editor and as the apology chapter says, English is not their first language.
The story is magnificently written so far. I can already see a lot of themes like depression, loneliness, insecurity, despair, societal prejudices, parental themes, abuses, possessiveness and a lot more to come.
Characters are extremely great so far. I can see all of them getting attention and focus and for me, characters matter the most!
Symbolism are also excellent and properly used.
Keep up the great work.
Plot twists.
Philosophical.
Psychological.
The story has been going amazingly well.
My favourite things about this web novel are the characters and the phenomenal use of symbolism.
Keep up the good work.
Only 6 Chapters out and I have already become a fan of it. I have seen many movies and shows on bullying and I thought that this story must be about bullying as well, however when I read that the story is inspired from the author's real life, I knew I had to read it and boy I am so glad I did.
It has a very likeable cast of characters with my favourite character being Vansh and Reyansh is relatable to an extent. The inner monologues add so much depth.
The last three chapters have been 10/10 in my opinion. I just wished the author wrote at least one chapter per day because then it might have had been picked up by the Webnovel and the author would have started to earn.
I understand that the author is a teenager though and that he has a lot of things to do plus writing a story like this might require a lot of effort.
I wish all the best to the author. I hope he becomes successful!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.