Beast Enslavement: A Failure's Path to World Domination

This started off fairly well and had me hooked. A guy transported into an Englishman's body etc etc. When Tony got going he had a lot of dominating games, losses and he gave a lot of halftime pep talks to his players then made spectacular comebacks. Then the novel quickly deteriorated into the repeat of dominating, losing against easy teams and SPECTACULAR COMEBACKS nonstop and Tony being an ass. Furthermore, the author is a pedo and Tony is also written as one being obsessed with a 13-15 year old girl throughout the chapters'. Yes, people may say he didn't do anything vastly inappropriate with her but yeah, no. She's still a 13 year old girl when this starts I think. It's sick.

Cliche as fuk. Somehow, amazingly, surprisingly i dont actually really understand the first 2 chapter. That how i know either it a ****ty story or translations suck. Good day

The very beginning starts with the death of Last Son of Krypton without any outside interference which kinda tickles up but sets the development. Bruce wants to redeem the death of his best friend is connecting us to the story. The son of Superman has not done his training yet, like Martian manhunter or Diana should teach him. This degrades the quality of the story. Son of Sups is acting like a real Teenager which provides realism to the story.

only a few chapters in and first thoughts on the story is that its confusing and weird. Constant switching between 1st and 3rd person every other sentence doesn't help either. Looking at the last upload makes the novel looked dropped so thats my main reason not going to continue. No point getting invested in a story for it to never continue.

"How do you know?" she asked, surprised.

I laugh as I saw he had a blood mustache. I wipe it off his mouth but as I do I bite my lip. Just touching his lips made me want to kiss them. I quickly turn away and shake my head. 'You really need to stop this! Right now!'

Evening fell over, and everyone started getting ready for the big ceremony. As Dev came to his room looking for Bhumi, she was nowhere to be found. He looked for Bhumi and Ashi, but gave up soon, since he was in hurry and figured both of them were in some other room getting ready as well. Dev finished getting ready in his black suit and checked himself in the mirror. He approved of how he looked and was turning around to leave, but stopped in the middle. From the dressing table, he picked up a bottle of perfume, Chanel, it was Bhumi's perfume. He brought the bottle to his nose and opened its cap. He smiled fondly to himself and put the bottle down.

"What the hell was that? Your new summon" Baldy asked shaking his head.