BE STILL MY BEATING HEART

Interesting to read, story development is a bit catchy and you would wanna hope to see where it goes next. Good work to the author.......  More characters should be added though

I like your story title it is marvellous, I love your writing style. your plot is super strong. I hope you must complete your novel, I'm waiting for the next.

Hello readers! I hope you're all doing well. This is my second piece of writing, and I'd love to know what you think of it. I'll wait for your recommendations.  HAVE A GOOD DAY!

Maybe this is too early for a review since there is only one chapter. But this story definitely have potential. I will keep reading and keep the spirits high author.

Although it is just one chapter but still l cane here to encourege the author for her work....
It is very well written and the world background is also pretty good.... Overall its going to be a great story l guess...
Waiting for the next chapters

Finally something interesting to read with new concept and it can easily hook up my interest.I usually don't read novel that are not interesting enough to hook me up in first few chapters. Thanks for the novel

Maybe this is the first novel that I liked on the web novel and planned to read till the end, as it is well-written ma'am. Alas~ you've uploaded only one chapter but desperately waiting for more, the way you describe the characters was enthralling, definitely gonna add it to my library.

Overall the idea of your novel is good, I like all the characters, I like the mansion and the way you added grey color enhanced its beauty .Best of luck