What an intriguing tale, can't wait to see more updates from you, this is was a well-written book from the writing quality to the character design everything is in perfect shape, Like I said can't wait to read more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The writing quality is excellent, grammar is great, updates are rolling, and story development is awesome. The characters are cool but i'd like more description of what they look like and what their underlying motives are. The world-building is fantastic but I'd like more environmental description. This story hits just about every checkbox except I notice that the story is too often dialogue without anything else, so add that and this story will be elite.
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Bolcurut here, desu. This is the novel that I have promised; to replace the novel Enter of Adventure. However, unlike the novel Enter of Adventure, which is a VRMMOPRG game, this novel is a MOBA-type game played on smartphones. I have made this novel well and correctly so that you are comfortable reading it. Very different from the novel Enter of Adventure which has many errors. And I hope you like this novel. That's all from me, thank you very much for taking the time to read this novel.
This is quite interesting, the main character is abandoned and becomes a coach. Hopefully he can return to being a professional player, and show that the owner's decision was wrong.
I'm waiting for this, according to the promise the author gave. Hopefully this novel will have many readers, especially readers who like Moba games. Good luck, authors.
I liked this novel! As a lover for the video game genre, this novel is something refreshing and well written. Keep the good work author, you are doing something great here!
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