The story has a cool premise and the system seems unique as well. The author seems to have done a lot of research regarding guns and the like, so good job, author! One thing I have to say though is that the story needs some proofreading and some extra details. The plot seems to go a bit too fast; it would be better if it was slowed down a bit.Good luck author! :)
now this book is in my top 3.. very very good and u wont find any other books that the MC cheat need him snorting white powder, hes an addict.. oh btw.. if possible read this at night it will make you sleep easier because its a very warming story
great start very promising waiting for new chapters .,..............................................,,..........................................hope it gets picked up.
story's great and it's freaking free! so what's stopping you from reading this! nothing! oh just one thing, update is currently unstable so just waiting for author to overcome whatever issue they're going through. until then, 4.4 stars from me
Good stuff it now it showing interesting characters and how they are related, living, social, economic positions got to know.now what happened next how they have survived, business running is important
Nice story. the grammar is not bad too. I like the way how the author shows the ML becoming a strong person from a weak. And the way he mends the story is great. Keep up the work author.
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