I really hate this story, it doesn't make any sense for example the best vr company make game with tutorial that don't teach any thing mc get bad titles from tutorials because he can't make good items,it have ai that don't help any how just tch , he see world boss in beginner area and he kill it with luck but story say he have bad luck, like how? Kill the crafter after making some beginner item? It doesn't make any sense, he make item that break the game and game company say he come for deal What is this game? Just for grave and shovel he obliterate a dungeon?IF YOU WANT A STORY THAT MAKE SENSE DO NOT READ I REPEAT DO NOT READ
Review cause novel is 1st person, has good grammar, and tons of tiddi- I mean good plot. Also author is chill...But mostly because of the tidd- I mean plot.
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I like the way he explains things in detail in a way that makes the reader have a clear image of the scenery and the characters which helps a lot with the immersion
Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.
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