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the protagonist is relatable, the game seems fun overall a good read
The things are well placed characters personalities are defining.
You are doing nice work~~
Keep up the good work author, I'll be reading
You are doing a great job author even though it seems to be your first novel keep up the good work all the best!!
Likeable characters
Good game mechanics
Regular updates
Bing watch worthy
Cons- grammar in some chapters
Some transition
Either way I am enjoying it very much all the best writer
but on the other hand grammar need a lot of work,
use grammarly and write on Google docs it will help alot,
am rooting for you and cheering ready for more chapters
I hope you will get an editor. if you can't find one (which is really easy to find) i could also offer to be an editor for the novel.
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