wow i wonder how this review got here. personally haven't read it yet but the authors work is very good and saw the concept behind this story. give it a shot.
the story isn't that fast nor slow I think it's on the right track the story doesn't enter the game in the first chapter it's great that you put a backstory before the mc even went to play the game
so I really enjoyed this story, the author does a really good job of building up the world and the game in general through I do think the tutorial section was a little bit rushed and would have been better if the actions of the character were told less and shown more. I really like where the story seems to be going and have high hopes for the future of this novel.
I also would recommend the rest of the author's books as well as those are also top quality books.
It's a really great story that elevates the genre of a system in real-life and the VR game to a higher level. The only bad thing about the story is that the MC doesn't have any supporting cast yet, so it's a bit boring to read the MC's thoughts and actions, there needs to be a little romance or comradery with others. But the story is still new so it might come up in future chapters.
You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed.
My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.
Found about this story from the authors main account(Abadom) in one of his ff, zero fate, cos i couldnt wait for a week for the ff to update. Although i havnt read it yet im pretty hopeful since all of author’s other ffs are well written and the plot is god-tier. Overall im excited to start.
for the author I have two words "*uck you" I was almost late work today on other news love the story ........,......................... ........ gg . ggdtjcigifigigitjdhdhridhtoditjdjfjfjtotox
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I also would recommend the rest of the author's books as well as those are also top quality books.
My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.