AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM

I don't quite like these kinds of stories since it's not my cup of tea but this one is pretty nice. It has good story development, nice characters and a great plot.

if you can correct your typos and, have this on par with blood warlock and a better werewolf story than MWS then i do my best to support this novel

Wow wow just wow, this book is truly amazing 😍🤩🤩🤩 I love it .
Though it's still in it's early phase so I can't say much all I can say is that I am loving it. Can't wait for more chapters so don't disappoint me Mr author jt3.

Yet another amazing book by the author 😌
The book is extremely amazing
I don't wanna stop reading
Although I don't really read ML books, i love this one☺️

The author has a unique approach on the story as he switches perspective between engaging with the readers and strorytelling.

In fact, it was rather immersive— that is until cut scenes of information jump into the picture and leaves one lamenting the sudden disruption!

Some people might think, I don’t like info dumb, and straight up quit from reading… Well, don’t quit just yet!

The story has got potential in it (coming from someone who read a very populare novel with a similar theme.)

I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try.

So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader.

The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action.

The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way.

The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive.

Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any.

Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room).

As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed.

I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.

This was an amazing read! I love how the world (setting) was slowly brought into the picture, along with the technology, the crystals, etc. Although I don’t typically read this genre, this was incredibly written. Though there are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, it doesn’t decrease the quality of the writing whatsoever.

Keep it up!

I like how he started explaining the book and he did it in a brief way. The chapters end in ways that make you want to read the next chapter. This book has a bright future.