AWAKENED: THE BEAST SYSTEM

I’m not sure how to write a good review, but I’ll try.

So far the story is really good, the worldbiulding that mixes sci-fi and fantasy is well pictured and doesn’t soffucates the reader.

The thing that catches most attention is the description of the places and of the scenery as it makes the reader feel like the story happens in front of him, so with touch and smell and can overall enjoy the action.

The characters depicted are overall well written and interesting in their own way.

The story doesn’t seem to present plotholes that won’t, or can’t, be explained later and overall the atmosphere of the book is immersive.

Though I’m singing lodes of the story there are some problems such as: the massive info jumps in the first chapter. They break the action. But as I already said in the rest of the story I didn’t find any.

Some grammaticals errors that makes the reader feel disoriented and characters that seem to be part of the furniture (in they way that they are there but don’t have much space or importance, like the forniture of a room).

As for the story development a lot happens but I can feel that, at the moment, we’re in the tip of the icerberg of the thing that will happen in the future. So for now not many things are explained and new character will come, maybe some will be given more light, and thus my review can be changed.

I don’t think there is more to say about the story apart from good read if you find it intersting and my review useful.

This was an amazing read! I love how the world (setting) was slowly brought into the picture, along with the technology, the crystals, etc. Although I don’t typically read this genre, this was incredibly written. Though there are occasional typos and grammar mistakes, it doesn’t decrease the quality of the writing whatsoever.

Keep it up!