Australasia: The Roar of a New World

Please edit and re-release the first chapters. Could not get past the first half of chapter one due to all the grammatical errors. For an English reader it is very offputting to think that the author thought it was acceptable to publish their work without a proper edit. I am not able to stomach reading past the first chapter with the sheer number of incorrect sentences I had to make sense of. I like the idea behind the novel and love political struggles/strategy/kingdom building/action/adventure but I hate improper English.

good novel, there is some potential 👍🏻 waiting for the next chapters ......................................................................................................

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"After Raavan died, His brother vibishan became the king of lanka." Replied Dashrath;

Ancestor shook, "Something is coming from the sky!"

As he walked into his office, people greeted him with a bow, he went in without looking at anyone.

Escanor was about to respond, but Lili forced his head down to the ground with her foot. Not even Escanor is strong enough to overpower her now.

[A blue box?]