I usually don't go for sci fi content but I'm really glad I gave this one a go. the prologue itself pulls you in and it literally doesn't let go. I can't wait to read more!
loved it, I recommend others to read through too, give it a try and I guarantee the author won't disappoint you. exciting action-packed start.
After a long time a proper Sci-fi.
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I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)
Pretty good so far. Writing quality is very good; I did not notice any mistakes. The MC seems quite interesting, and it compels the reader to want to read more. Keep on writing author; you're doing good!
Hi, glad to be the first one to give you a review, good work on the story development, I just want to point out some things, even if it is a work in progress give it a shot on the synopsis, be playful, creative, and then don't worry about grammar correction for now.
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After a long time a proper Sci-fi.
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!