Yeah this novel is dead alright... I'll just wait for another translator to show up and do the rest of the job. So sad, thanks, thunder, for destroying the novel and it's rank.
Writing Quality is as good as it can be (with some error's here and there but not anything major).Stability of Updates. With 2 chaps a day is really good, you can always comeback the next day and read 2 more chapters.Story Development is a bit slow in the start, but it builds up in later chapters, and frankly is really good.Character Design is a bit lacking in my opinion as I don't really know what the mc is looking like, other than he looks like his father, and what we were told in chapter 1.World Background is really good but slow, we first really get some world building in later chapter (around chapter 60)Altogether a really good story with good upload schedule, super immersed in the world, and is really looking forward to what happens next!
Got to the last updated chapter just to give it a chance, I really liked the plot but it was poorly executed. Author does not explain the overall limitation on the MC and randomly throws them in out of the blue with no warning. Main character has no understanding of people, he randomly blunders through things trying to act cool but never considers the consequences. How he can gain respect for the way he executes his plans and wastes resources on things not needed for many chapters is poor planning. His overall powers are poorly explained and with 78 chapters you would expect to see him in the mid 30s level wise, he is still in the teens and that disappoint me. His stats also seems not to reflect what was written down in early chapters unless I have the timeline mixed up in my head. 50 days would equal 150 stat points from his passive ability, this seems really slow progress time scale but fast unending action when looked at what has been accomplished in short span of time. No time to consolidate all his gains and it just seems poorly planned out. Worth reading for people who can live with the plot holes, unrealistic MC and weird relationships.
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With this author you never have to worry about the quality of the writing. His characters are always a delight. His story development leaves you always wanting more. The author creates a wonderful and enjoyable world for his story. He's awesome to his readers and the only problem I've seen with his updates is that after hes done I JUST WANT MORE. If you're new amd haven't heard of him check out Rise of The Undead Legion. You won't be sorry.
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