already read it like 22 chapter, is not rip off of RI, and thanks god it also not fan fiction. the power system in this novel little bit confusing, its like retard combination of generic cultivation novel with RI power system. and the cheat is not full automatic retard update, but still need some ingridient to enchant the gu.
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It's only got five chapters (or four if the first chapter was a prologue) but it feels distinctive from others stories I've read. I mean, "we can't have our own zombie apocalypse so make it on VR world so the virus won't spread into our real world."Anyway, everything is in a good state, especially the scenes with guns and booms... if you can describe it more "gore-ly" and add more blood, it will be much better. The characters seems unique, and the AI as well.Overall, good job.
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