Astral Apostle

*Raw name*
Astral Apostle
星界使徒

*Brief Introduction*
The star realm is a world full of myths. The strong will always be an eternal topic. Human beings have found their own place in this disputed world with their own power. However, the door of the alien world has been opened, and the dark ancient gods are resurrecting the youth of the alien world, the elves of this world, fighting for the ordinary and working hard for happiness. He gave up his deep hatred, he rejected the power of eternal life, but fate's mercy left him bruised and bruised. Where to go, a life of humiliation is still the light that burns life. This is a story of the growth of a strong man...

The chapters are split up. Chapter 40(1) on webnovel is actually chapter 19 MTL/RAW. The site smuggled in a new business opportunity - splitting the chapters. In this case, they gave us less than 19 full chapters. Used to be 60.. 40.. What a magic! Of deception.

The first chapters.. are unpolished by the author in my opinion. But if it improves later on then it's fine. There's some bland, stiff dialogue, unnatural behaviour, forced plot. The high rating's reason? Author's name does the job, for example. Besides, there's potential, just that the execution so far is average.

The MC got [Agility] talent, then after using it he calls himself talented while being serious. Ha ha ha.. :D

It's one of these novels where the one that takes MC role is decided by system (or well, apparently it's his Super ability). The author doesn't bother to write about the process of e.g. overcoming a language barrier. Just use system and... done, problem solved. For convenience...

Grown men shown so far have somewhat flawed, unsuitable mentality for the roles they play (apparently they are experienced hunters but I wonder how they grew up and how they survived till now in such a dangerous world). The MC himself is alright, a bit dumb, a sheltered flower, no survival skills, so whatever logic or reasoning he comes up with is fine:) Hopefully he'll grow up as his adventures continue, or else be prepared for masterminds to have less IQ than he does.

The author chose to write a novel with system and copied a popular idea. What was his motivation for this, one could wonder. In the same batch of trials, the author of "Protect our Patriarch(Chief)" actually roasted this kind of system novels.

My comment is based only on the 19 (split into 40) chapters translated right now, because I have not touched MTL. If I read more chapters in future I'll either re-write my comment or add a fresh one with proper rating. 19 is not much after all and the subsequent might have a higher quality, I don't know. There are novels like World's Best Martial Artist, Museum of Deadly Beasts, A Sorcerer's Journey, Black Iron's Glory and many more that had even more boring, or cliche, or flawed initial chapters yet turned out to be much much better as I continued to read. It might also be the case with Astral Apostle.

Guys just a warning this book is on hiatus and has been for months!!! read at your own risk, though i must say it was a really good book, shame the author has gone away and is unlikely to return.

well compared to most trail novels this quite good but it doesn't deserve the hype readers are spreading just because it's from tlm's writer
it's a copy of fantasy simulator so i would compare it with that only(compared general novels it's still quite good)
it's subpar compared to fantasy simulator
it's more of watered down version of fantasy simulator  as the Original work had many points which made more engaging which this lacks
most importantly it was imeressive while astral apostle isn't
as Astral apostle make it feel like mc is in VRrpg rather than a real world far away

We riot if this doesn’t get picked. Considering it was made by TLM’s author it is going to get picked but we riot nonetheless. 140 characters sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen

I swear to God if some sign-in novel gets picked instead of this.

exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor. so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my exp Exp amen

Basically feels like a sequel to legendary mechanic or at least It’s based in the same universe
Translation is good
The story seems fun I want more

I really hope this gets choosen because it is really the best one of this batch.
I am sure Webnovel could earn more money through this story as people are more likely to purchase chapter for this one.
Please give this novel a chance.

The second world is toooo Chinese cringe and CHINISE this Chinese that Chinese Author I hope you die. .. .. ...... . .. ....... .. .. ..... .  .. . ..

It was a 4 star but then the Author brought the most unnecessary cringe trash Character that his small Chinese brain (if he has a? )would ever think of