I have read the first few chapters , and I go to say , the storyline is very intresting and the narration is awesome. So far so good. I would request the author to release a prequel to this novel about Valentine's life before death.
I have enjoyed the story a lot. Everything flows well and is easy to read. One thing I'm confused about is how the characters get stronger. I don't know if I'm missing something or if it just hasn't been revealed yet. I also hope that this doesn't become a harem. I don't want to see the mc with a bunch of girls. Overall the story is well written and I would highly recommend it.
I just wrote this review to warn people about his girlfriend corpse got raped. although author said there is no netorare.
but I don't want give bad rating for this point.
The world building and attention to detail in this novel is amazing! Seriously, reading was intriguing and like a mini adrenaline rush at times! Especially in the first chapter. It's been a long time since I've been so invested in a book so early!
What I truly appreciated was that the world detail didn't stop after that point though. The author continued to create both suspense and a vivid picture as we continued.
The spelling and grammar were also great, which obviously goes a long way in holding the flow of the story.
First thing first I love this book so far. Unless I missed some there have been no grammatical errors, while there are some strange events the story development is fluid and well put together and so is the character development there hasn't been too much yet as there only 4 chapters done at the time of this review. Because of how little there chapters are at the moment I can't say anything about the update stability. In terms of the world back ground I don't know much about it because the story hasn't progressed far enough, but after 20 or so chapters I'll come back and update this review. All in all I hope you guys try out this book and have a wonderful reading experience.
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
La historia puede empezar un poco lenta y desconocida ya que siempre trato de leer fanfic pero es un historia interesante que cada día va mejorando y lo mejor hasta el día de hoy no se si donde llegara eso es lo bueno de una historia original nunca se sabe que tendrá
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but I don't want give bad rating for this point.
What I truly appreciated was that the world detail didn't stop after that point though. The author continued to create both suspense and a vivid picture as we continued.
The spelling and grammar were also great, which obviously goes a long way in holding the flow of the story.