Never play baseball before, but this is a great story for you who does love this sport. The author knew their stuff and chose the correct diction to describe the process of the baseball game. I love how the author wrote the process of the characters training instead of suddenly going genius over it out of nowhere. Although yes, the character is granted some cheat by having these amazing inborn skills, but the author still makes him lack of basic foundation in baseball since he never plays before. So, this is a very logical plot which I’m fond of.For writing wise, I do think there’s some room for improvement but overall it’s adequate. It just needs some little editing. I do recommend breaking down your paragraph to make it easier on the eyes, because some parts, it does seem long.Good luck and keep writing author! 🙏🏻
I think it will be better if you make his dao companion dominate the other women and make them part of the main battle harem and make the main follow a diferent path than before rather than been emotionless with all make him sever his emotions of everything but the love for his dao companion and make her become the one giving and dominating the women as a good wife.
I’m sorry but, Continue already?I felt like the narrator through the pages and at the same time I felt like I was carried on bird wings through every event of Zhilakoa’s “can’t wait to see where it ends” and Eryn? An important and delicate ingredient to this meal and please coooook
The story is interesting, i have only read the first chapter and it is good. Maybe I will read it more if i don't get lazy. Overall, my first impression from the first chapter is good.
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