Mind. Blown. Would definitely read a whole series of these.
Forthright you could obviously tell the author did his research; having to create a character with such a rollercoaster backstory gives the story a perfect first person view.
First chapter got me hooked and I if I were the person reading this review, would 100% check the book out to see why its a 5 star. [img=recommend]
Great book! The pacing is really good, and the MC here is an accurate representation of the types of relationships Cyclxne experiences in his school :DDDD
Writing Quality: Well-written and smooth to read through.
Stability of Updates: Good
Story Development: Interesting premise so far.
Character Design: Great
World background: A modern setting and a game setting, very good.
this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah.
i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizen
so far very good introduction. i think i need to read more chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.
It's a good read. the pacing was good and there weren't any glaring issues with the writing. I'm not a fan of info-dumping backstory straight at the first chapter but this story made it work. Hopefully, you'll like it as much as I have.
I'm not usually in to video game stories, but this might just change my mind! Great and world building, an interesting plot and smooth writing. I enjoyed what I've read quite a lot. Good job, author! (:
Honestly an unbelievable experience, thus far - I'm incredibly impressed with the character development and design, with the main character's backstory being very detailed. This is genuinely a masterpiece that people should consider reading, even if the fantasy genre isn't your thing.
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Forthright you could obviously tell the author did his research; having to create a character with such a rollercoaster backstory gives the story a perfect first person view.
First chapter got me hooked and I if I were the person reading this review, would 100% check the book out to see why its a 5 star. [img=recommend]
Stability of Updates: Good
Story Development: Interesting premise so far.
Character Design: Great
World background: A modern setting and a game setting, very good.
i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizen
so far very good introduction. i think i need to read more chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.