The story is fine, has a bit of a dark vibe, but nothing too emo. 50 to 70 percent of each mini chapter is a massive stats spam.Its causing me to dislike the story a lot. There's no point reading this if you don't binge read it from start to finish. The chapters are too small to be interesting or memorable by themselves, so you won't remember what the story was like with a new update, the chapters are just too short to allow for such reorientation.So whilst the story is interesting on the whole, I dont recommend reading it untill it's fully released or changes the chapter sizes to not primarily reach a word count through an often times irrelevant and unchanged stats spam.I honestly recommend the author to post like 1500 words at a min., and up to to 2500 words per chapter minus stats.That's what the wn guidelines recommend for contests as well.
Feng Wushu was direct "Hello thank you for coming im Feng Wushu" as he finished with this he just stood in his place and wasn't planning on saying anything else, so Feng Chen just told everyone
"Astral Projection had overdrawn my soul. I could only compress it to make up for the excess Soul Qi. I kept on compressing and compressing, and before I knew it, I had broken through to Rank 7. But it wasn't a cultivation breakthrough, it was more of a temporary spike. I knew my Rank was going to drop after this, and it sure did; it's back to Rank 1 for me. But that isn't the point. As my soul continued to grow denser, I felt it start to sink. And without a vessel... without my body to keep it in check it started to slip, no, sink out of the Realm's boundaries. And then..."
Valerie just shake her head and went to her room to freshen up, well not her room it's the room that Mary organized for her to stay temporarily in her house..
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