I found this when I searched up phyco to see if their were any good evil character stories. Here I find this gem, great for me. So far I am loving it and expect even more even if I am ou on the first 30 chapters.
Update chapter 341.Guess that's it for me, huh. The latest chapters kind of got out of hand, plenty of plotholes. The pace is all over the place. Why would they fight for hundreds of years then go all-out and do so much in just 2 months. The power ups are also too quick with no rhyme or reason, jumping a whole rank because author hasn't prepared corresponding arc and there was a gap. Also don't like how MC behaves lately, he was doing better in early chapters, it seems so rushed up now and he's just going all solo guerilla. Corpse tide of Zenjue took several years of buildup to settle which was fine, but how about now?The novel felt like a mix of Demon's Diary, Protect Our Patriarch and some other. On one hand they're on islands, away from mainland, and warring another second-rate sect. On the other hand their little realm is merging with some demon world and there are space tunnels. A quite interesting mix to be honest, but the execution seems rather poor to me after the first 200,300 chapters: from management, planning, convos and buildups it became more of a fighting cultivation novel where MC constantly goes and fights powerhouses. This is boring.
I'm really enjoying it, I'm curious to see how the world will develop. Mc's development is pretty cool, when I started because of the synopsis I was afraid he would turn into a boring nut, I'm glad it didn't happen,
Personally, I think confidence and morale are critically important. I placed this review here just to reflect that.As of now, the story isn't really face-paced. Ideally, I think it would be better to increase the pace but I also don't want to compromise too much on the details or risk creating plot-holes.I do re-read and check things to minimize the plot-holes as much as realistically possible.I also take constructive criticism very seriously. I will try to incorporate every comment that seems feasible and beneficial for the story's growth.Overall, this is a long-term project with a lot of potential.
Anyway, as Leto observed the chaos taking place, he tried to help his comrades but his efforts were to no avail as they were completely out of their minds thus leaving him with the only option to knock them out.
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