Loved the previous series and loving this one. The story is similar to system stories but the realistic element with encapsulating details makes it different from others.
The system is strong but not broken (Yet) the power gain so far is not rushed so much that the novel is dead in 200 chapters, the characters seem to possess intelligence and are not just stupid side characters there to make the MC look smart, the MC is decently smart, not over the top but above average.The world building isn't there yet but it has potential.Overall i hope this is picked, but it's not a badly translated power fantasy so maybe it won't be picked, the name kinda lets it down and i feel that it will put people off trying this.
I'm going to start directly: I read all your chapters already out at once because I really appreciated your idea. You have a really good writing style that improves throughout your writing. I have no negative criticism to make of you apart from that your characters are not described enough... But... I wonder if you are not doing it on purpose... Because, we notice in your last chapter that your character is very think about it so I'm almost sure that you're deliberately not describing certain characters too much to do it later (that's why I'm giving you 5 stars, hoping I'm not wrong). Anyway, Bravo, I'm happy to support a small novel creator, I hope he becomes popular!
is there going to be any release .........so disappointed by qidian and with translator for many weeks we didn't get any update there no update stability.I am droping from my list
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