Start is good, rest is not, dont waste your time with this one and shovel some moreMC gets only more and more stupid, and overall just a big disappointment
Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter...................................................................................................
Winter_Iris.Your writing always captivate me.Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel. Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.Your skills amaze me.💛I have read two chapters and I know that I am going to love this novel. This is just amazing.Amazing, amazing work!I'm so proud of you.Five stars! 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟Keep writing.Always cheering for you.🧡
AuTHoR..update faster..first chp is dope..already hate the princess..bash her and kill her....anyway it cool..keep MC OP.but unilike other stories,,make him hide and use it secretly...like a hiding dragon? like he appears to be a cripple but has a secret identity as an OP MF??keep MC OP...add some romance and fluff...just build it...dont make MC a perverted idiot or make his lovers shallow...if harem keep it small
There is hardly anything of significance that happened in the 98 chapters I read. Anything interesting or related to world building happened to other characters and the MC only learns of it when he comes back from hiding somewhere and hears the gossip. Otherwise the MC is grinding experience painfully slowly. Two issues I have: the writer repeats statements over and over again, using slightly different words, or many times the same words. All this does is artificially increases word count without adding to the story. For a story where nothing happens over a large number of chapters it is very frustrating to suffer this bad tactic from writers to increase word count. Second issue: the cost of each chapter vs the enjoyment that you get out of it is totally imbalanced. Why would I spend money when it takes twenty chapters for some minor thing to happen? If you’re going to read this, save your money, and use it only when the story is free. Or wait for the story to have 500 chapters before investing.
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