This is not good. I thought this will be a slice of life story but it isnt. Still, the story can be good too but this one is not good. MC is incapable of educating his children properly. When he was going to reprimand hihis children, they start crying and he melted and decided to let them be. Then, the children keep causing trouble after trouble and he will solve it with violence again and again.
If this is not the best novel i've ready so far, I don't even know what is. The development, the world building, the logical progression, everything is just perfect. Thank you translator :)
I really would like to know what happens next as the way you have written this is really interesting. like being able to reach FTL 2000 years ago through something a child could make is an interesting idea.
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I was hoping for something good based on the ratings ... alas, chapters 1-3 were pretty bad. Writing quality and language were the biggest issues for me and they made me drop this within 3 chapters. The author jumps between tenses and generally has issues with sentence structure and coherence. It almost feels like something machine-translated at times.
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