The premise is actually interesting. However, I am quite bothered by the storytelling style, where some sentences and punctuation could have been improved to make it more comfortable for the reader.
Well, who else would put a 5 start review on this work but me, right? so don't mind this review and put your own out there. Just want to experience the feeling of getting a 5 star reviewHaaaaaaa......It does feel great receiving oneJust someone trying to be a writer. I hope you like it!
hahahaha this is very nice.He doesn't care much about grammar, he just smiles and waves........................................................................
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