i really liked the story and writing style , but author is it really dropped because it really has a lot of potential and is still quite a bit popular ?
I like the idea and find it refreshing but the execution left much to be desired.Leaving aside grammar and such, there’s a huge problem of info-dumping/world padding of useless stuff that would put slide of life to shame and horrible pacing. At chapter 200, we are not even a week into the novel. And most of it doesn’t even bring anything substantial to the plot. Also, there’s a lot of inconsistency in the world building. Specially the timeline of various stuff. The MC said he’s 23 but a couple of chapters later, his senior of 2 years has been inquisitor for 15 years. Other time his team member saved treasures for multiples years to afford something. That’s just pure math but it goes deeper with the timeline established related to cultivation. With the life expectancy described, they shouldn’t be able to be at the palace stage at their age. Also, the Order only existed for about 500 years but they have a buttload of soul realm expert from who knows where when 50000 years old clan had 3 in their total history. Finally, the cultivation system and art related to it is very shallow right now and not explored very much or in a meaningful way despite a lot of mention about art but its always about grade and not detailed. Same thing about the Dao, always mentioned on a surface level without any dept.A lot of potential, but wasted as it is now.
I know this will not get picked but I still hope because this novel does have similarities with chrysalis but it is not a complete copy and is actually pretty good
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An interesting concept with a bit of a twist. A demon starting at the bottom of the food chain. Well, if that isn't worth reading, then I don't know what is! Give it a try :)
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