Apocalypse Cheater

I like it so far and keep it up I think this can turn into a amazing novel. Good good good good good good good good good goood good good Good good good good good good good good good goood good good Good good good good good good good good good goood good good

heeee  author-san this power stone is definitely not a bribe for more chapters but still don't tell anyone okay  if not then

1) uses themes and elememts from different books/videogames. Really disgusting how he is butchering their stories to be put in his. Lazy.Unimaginative.

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.

Premise was fine then ,
2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.


And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

there's just way too much infodump,there's whole chapters of him just thinking out his thoughts.

I really like the story and I was excited about the main character actually telling someone the truth in the beginning but I can't read it anymore because of the non stop descriptions on everything. It's like you went and found every word you could to describe one single thing every paragraph. Sometimes it gets so bad you take up a whole chapter. If you could dial it down then I think you have something here.

The story is great, but I wanted to ask if you could make an auxiliary chapters of the important ppl and pictures and status of the Mc and plz try to make the status screen and systems notification and when he gets exp and stuff more in order or a different font or  in this [] makes it look cleaner [img=recommend][img=update]

Goood