Not bad, although I feel like its lacking a bit in the action part. Its really good though for someone who likes the soccer genre. Update faster and I'll drop Powerstones everyday
Your story Backgound is interesting but it was not really writen much after the intro and i fand this the best part of your story.Writing quality is bad, you can read the story but to many gramar fault but the greteatst BS is your characters in the story. To many bad cliches. lack of consistency and logic, when i have read the story i was thinking are all persons in the game idiots or 5 year old children?
This is amazing you did a really good job setting this up I like the storyline and the way you portrayed the story was really cool and I think it helped get the feel you wanted
Good luck little author😁 hope your novel does well remember if you lose aspiration for this novel take a little hiatus could be a month or more then maybe you could write this novel again remember to tell it straight up to your readers that your taking a break or it might be really serious and you could just quit this novel again remember to tell the audience that is all my advice 👌.
I've only read 6 chapters but I have a feeling this is the next big thing on Webnovel. Keep up the good work Mr. Author I look forward to the journey in your world.
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