I very much enjoyed the novel. The hero was on a high level of personality, intelligent, a ruthless killer. Until chapter 21, things began to deteriorate because of the crazy girl who included him in his team. The dialogues between them are trivial, crazy and stupid. Also, his sexual relationship with her is a disgusting thing. His first team was good, obedient and without petty dialogues. Thank you for your effort. What ruined the novel is that crazy girl and the trivial dialogue with her, on the whole, she deserves 5 stars. The chapters were long and good.
honestly i don't really do reviews but this is a story i have passed reading multiple times due to no reviews but damn this story is just getting better and better the more i read
Finally I've found a story where the scene and the characters are TOUGH. Here you won't find fake battles ending with "the power of friendship" or "Hurray! The good guy wins". I'm looking forward to more chapters and you should do it too
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So the grammar is good as far as I have read, and although this is not the genre I usually go for, I must say that this book is worth complimenting! Keep up with the good work!
Loving it so far looking forward to more!! when are the updates going to be? and I love how the character is your typical good guy! really recommend this!
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.