this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?
So i Guess i wasted my time? Reading the first two chaps with ranks and stuff. the thing that ruined It for me is her yep her Plus i feel like its just gunna get worse with 2 main charcters the author has to have Them grow from experince which would Mean double the work but then again what experinCes wOuld they grow from? I give up but yall check it out and see for yourself dont mind me.
Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.
I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.
I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.
Amazing story line. I love how the characters are developed. The mc is really amazing love his personality. Keep the story up looking forward to the rest.
I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.
So far I'm enjoy it! You can really tell how your writing style has improved throughout the chapters. Good job man! I would say to be a little more careful with punctuation and be a little more aware of the pace of the story-- should keep the flow from going too fast but don't make it too slow with a bunch of details. Other than that, you did pretty good. Looking forward to more chapters.
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