Earlier in the novel the character was only around the boy and story was unclear how ever if a person reads from the very 1st chapter to 39th I guess , huge development in both the writer grammar , delivery, story and the novel , if it goes as it is now , pls help it , if helped it can be a great great great manga
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The novel is good the way of starting a novel is pretty interesting and plot of the story is very good too overall the novel is pretty decent, except the grammatical errors and word choice, but putting these aside the novel is pretty fun to read. Look forward to reading it more!
its a very good book if you are into stories that evolve around history and facts. hint of past present and foreshadowing is amazing the future chapters have a lot of potential
Man tries a lot it's a little bit confusing at few points but story is pretty solid brilliant suspense and writing skill a little over mythological and little grammatical mistakes i would say it's a solid 4/5
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