It’s ridiculous how bad the translation is. I wanted to give it some time and read like 30 chapters, but it’s becoming more and more confusing and I give up.Chapters are mixed up, or rather there are different scenarios translated the author has used in his drafts, I assume.I have no idea how no1 even proof reads what is being released here. And they want money for this.No thanks.Dont waste time on this and confuse your mind.
I read its MTL. Good story. Ending is a bit rushed. Not a wholesome or satisfactory ending. It was good till mid story but after that it was a gigantic mess. A lot of things were not explained.
Keep writing please! As a premiere SSS Potatomon, I require tons of chapters as evolution material, and this is quality work. Loved it! Now I just need to finish writing 140 characters.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Has FML already been chosen? ........................................................... .................................?????????????????? ??????????......
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