Ancient Supreme Overlord

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The writing is of good quality and easily understood and smoothly read. The updates are consistent so far, the story is nice and developing well. The characters are nice and I like the MC as he deals with problems immediately doesn't let it fester. The world building is also integrated in the story well.
Read the tags, if you like it them then you will like the story.
PS: You do not get the same repetitive heroic MC, he is not dense or stupid so read it you will like it.
PS: Review at chapter 50

The syntax and formatting are almost as bad as MTL. I can't read it. Takes me right out of the story. Another thing I noticed is that instead of role-playing each character the writer makes it incredibly cliche. Young master cliche. It's just not very good. Keep at it, man. Get a development editor and some proofreaders. Use Google Docs and Grammarly.

Author my guy what a gem glad I found this loving it

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bro you got errors in your synopsis... fix that before you continue making a story....................................................mmmmmmmm

loving it

I like evrything in this book its just alot of flirting like alot otherwise its great give it a try
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