interesting premise and good start! the narration could be better with less \"passive voice writing\" but this seems like a fun read. added to my reading list
i guess ill review this, however take this review with a grain of salt since we are only barely getting started with the actual game. the first 40 chapters are purely prelude to what is actually going to happenbut this is my opinion of things so far.writing quality is pretty solid. simple easy to read writing, i dont find myself doing double takes on strange wording or similar things. overall good.updates. if the author can keep up his 2 chapters every other day ill be impressed. he has also done the smart thing and mass released the first many chapters in a short time frame to draw attention, now he just need the golden stars from the review to really draw attention in this oversaturated genre.the story is a bit hit or miss, its not very unique, but it is tried and tested, so you kind of know what to expect. i suppose its mostly personal preference, but i kind of look on in contempt the way he handle slaves mostly because i think im allergic to these neutral good types. and i think its hilariously hypocritical to have such strong stance on slavery while binding the adventure guild woman to eternal master-slave relationship.whatever. onto the next point.characters are ok. the mc and the wolf girl i quite like and their relationship makes sense. i like his friend and his wife. however the relationship with the mermaid woman and the adventure guild woman, kinda rub me the wrong way.mermaid does a 180 far too quickly and she feels forced into the story a bit too quickly because he needed the secretary type, the same goes for adventure guild woman, i know he needed someone versed in the world, but i just really dont like her...? oh yeah the r18 scenes are pretty cute. even if you arent really much into r18 content, its really short and sweet and generally dont take up much of the content. anyway enough ranting.the world is probably the most compelling, i find the monolith group story really good, and it makes alot more sense than the usual "black technology" or something similar explanation. so good job here author. we also have a pretty decent chunk of knowledge on the world, and i find the native faction and inhabitants act. fairly natural. the world is easily the most compelling about this story so far. so good job here. some compare it a bit to the novel "guild wars
Starting was super,it made me to read upto current chapter last night, i would like to read more chapters, please post more chapters,you have my full support 😀😀😀
I am only at the start of the novel (chapter 50ish) but I had a few things bugging me so I wanted to let it out, I would like the author to go into more detail about the spiritual energy density the only thing we are told is that the red valley is a "high" spiritual energy density region and that the black plains practically has nothing this makes it kinda hard to compare to other places and see the difference when Minos uses arrays to increase the density so maybe add a grade for the density of something. The second thing bugging me is character design, i think the only characters that are described are Minos, and his potential females, but the description are very brief and don't actually describe that much but maybe it improves with time, but if not please work on that.
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