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The writing is good, but a little cliche as it follows the much-used ‘Chosen One’ trope. The story is also a little too fast-paced. Also, I find the mother a little naive (or at the maximum a little schizophrenic).
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The writing quality is really good thou there might be some grammar mistakes along the way. It has a good plot and character development. Try it and You'll Like It.
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Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can earn from your current story or new ideas, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.
Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!
https://rb.gy/5s05wc