You know why I reviewed it this high. Go read it. Just do it. Don't waste your time and read it. ...........................................................................
It’s really good! Especially the ending. I was really impressed at the last few chapter. Usually a lot of novel ends abruptly and don’t have a clean ending but this one is really different. Wow when I read the last few chapters all the character development occured on MC began to make sense. I was filled with question before that when I read his actions. So good, 5 stars!
A very nice novel if you're looking for a change of pace from the usual overused cliché that everyone is copy pasting with slight differences. If i had to classify the novel I'd be a slice of life novel instead of the full action novels with little to no development where we don't see how the mcs actually level up or the hardships they go to breakthrough. Here we have what most wuxia/xianxa readers are really looking for a nice paced novel with good development and with rationality instead of the young master syndrome.
Guys i recommend this novel to whose who enjoy cultivation and RPGlike to readers, for now i cant say 100% that its one of the best, but im sure our dear author didnt disappoint his readers so read this ^^Ps: im not one of his family member ok? Im not even a donator, i only just love reading and not on comment type person but, u see im elated huehuehue, let's support this.!!
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Out of the 51 chapters posted, I have read 10 chapters. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good, Story is developing nicely. The character design is OK. A world background is good but it is not specified which era it is or what place it is.There are some issues with typos and spellings. The capital for 'I' is used less and the small i is appearing. At some places the sentences start abruptly and the inverted commas of the speech portion get left behind. These mistakes do not however interfere with the reading of the book.I would suggest you run your draft through an online grammar checker. It will get rid of many of the errors. I also do that otherwise little mistakes tend to creep in.All the best.
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
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