An npc who just wants to live idling around.

I love the story one of my favourites on this app but i am must say this first this story is not for everyone and the grammar is very bad at MTL level read if you enjoy and don't mind the grammar

me gusta mucho, por favor sigue actualizando


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just fix the grammar and you have a decent book.                                                                                                                 .

Hmmm I like the pacing of the story not too fast or too overloaded.

I enjoy your novel.

'''''''Writing and World and Character good''''''

Trash with m c trying to help protagonist pair with the heroines and babysitting him man this is so trash he has many way to earn money but doesn't. Has some kinda inferiority comples doesn't take things to get stronger and the lowlife author at first I though he was focusing so much on kumiko because she will be in ren's harem too but nah bruh it's brother and sisters lol and the grammar is trash and he says protagonist is dense? He is even more dense fc king dumb as s and why the fc k did he become aiko's assistant suddenly? And there many things. I'm on ch 38 now reviewing this

this is almost unreadable at times. the only reason I'm still willing to read this is because of the characters. this needs a lot of grammar and character association (i.e he, her)corrections to change this from engrisch to english. besides that nothing is amazing about this book. it's just a good read.

I'm really happy for the new chapter,though I didn't like the part where he tries to match the  protagonist  but i really like it , thanks for new chapter

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