An Empty Sky

"Headmistress," Master greeted with his usual blank look. "I've come to talk to you about an important matter."

"Not for us..." Edward onii chan said panting heavily.

Wala ho yun, teka may sugat ho kayo sa mukha,dadalhin ko ho kayo sa hospital..

Lvl:1 0/20

THE CLOCK ticks to 12 noon as my stomach grumbles for its feeding time, each fleeting second--it complains even louder. I try to remember why it's been acting this way, like a spoiled child who can't wait for its birthday present and therefore nags for attention; only mine demands for it. I can almost feel the acid rising up, ready to burn my insides, preparing to squeeze any organ it gets a hold of which will ultimately make me grit in freaking suffering, and later pathetically whimper in pain.

This particular event that had severely traumatized her and introduced her to the cellars of the military held her in the palms of its hands. Not to doubt, the event had definitely to do something with both her and her loved ones. Even her fiancée was involved in it and retrieving him was the main mission now.

Why?

dex     : 24      men  : 14

And we could all use a little change

Well, this 'teenager' WAS going to do something stupid, alright!

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read