it's a mediocre read. i enjoy the route the novel was trying to go with alchemy in a game to earn money, I just really dislike naive innocent uncultured uneducated main characters. there hasn't been a single moment of him becoming more social or actually learning any more than he already has not had he really just focused on alchemy. it's mostly just oh yeah he learned this and that in an hour and can do it with his eyes closed now. not saying it's bad, just it makes it seems like just another cultivation novel. there honestly doesn't seem like there's any point in the transitions to RL as they are basically meaningless snippets.
it's a good book but I think the arthur should put more chapters as long as there are chapters I will keep reading this book so keep up the good work and write more chapers
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From the very beginning, the reader can feel that the author has a concept for the whole story! A big plus for that ;) The plot is intriguing.Well done, Author!
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