This story is moving fast but content is top notch so reading it will be like wholesome. So read it and enjoy it give support to Author. It has a Good start and till now this story is fabulous but let's see how many chapters Author can make in a week.
I went into this thinking, 'hey maybe this will be a fun read' and you know what, around episode 80-90 the story actually starts. The first 90 chapters can be considered filler or backstory which play no part in the protags current predicament what a waste of my time reading this nonsense. There is also an endless amount of paragraphs talking about eastern beliefs and cultures which basically pauses the story while it talks about that stuff for a chapter or 20, and the worst thing about this is it really puts you a terrible mood. What a trash concept to kill off the protag and his father 90 chapters in... do it in the first 10! Such a waste of build up and my time. Oh and while i think of it there is also too much patriotism and a lack of other countries getting their share in the limelight, to be in a completely different world and yet the race the protag lives with is 'chinese' but everyone else is just some made up fantasy names, favouritism much?
Synopsis is Interesting ✓Overall Plot is so intriguing ✓Fighting scenes are improving ✓Letting the story more engaging✓Read this so you won't regret it (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
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Read what was free. Story progressed at a steady pace with ok character development but with so many new people added so quickly it’s hard to flesh them all out personality wise and to gain any attachment to them. Grammar is ok but the story switch POV and also from 1st to 3rd person mid chapter is confusing. I don’t normally go for stories with so many other povs especially all the time like this story. The world building can be expanded on more especially geographically as they travel through the forest. The buildings and villages also aren’t fleshed out well. How many houses are there where are key features in relation to each other etc. MC is ok so far not a hero but not a villain just a normal guy so far. His ability isn’t very unique though but the sharing of abilities is a nice twist at least. Wish you luck
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