Alpha Damon's Substitute Luna

    Author: Pennedby_Precious
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. CHZtq0
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    As he thought to open the systems main menu words with SHOP, MISSIONS, STATS, MODES, with greyed out options which he couldn't read.
  1. NStarXnN
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    —Caleb—
  1. Fallen_Angel_26
    Fallen_Angel_26 rated it
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    Tiene que continuar, en coreano actualmente está hasta el 218
  1. HayateAyasaki
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    I like this story, variety content. I'm excited to read the next chapter.Included romance, thrilling, suspence....... and this all categories are my favourite. 👏👏👏
  1. RagnallDEnd662
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    The story seems very interesting with lots of potential, but I'm very sorry to say this, but the writing quality is not that great.... 🥺 Some paragraphs are broken on wrong places, being cut in half in the middle of a dialogue. And some parts are written like you are writing a script instead of a story + the way you write the actions around the dialogue is unnatural and off putting.Don't take my feedback to the heart, I'm just saying this because I wish for you to improve so I can enjoy the story. Please continue to write 🙏
  1. Kw0z
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    If you like this genre, give this book a try

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