After finishing the first volume of the story, I can finally give my work an honest rating.
1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy.
2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake.
3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story.
4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever.
Even though it's only 3 chapters it captivates me how he care for he's brother, the world background and the beautifully written chapters. I hope it stays like this as chapter's goes by. Like it and certainly added to my libray. Cheers for the upcoming adventures with Zaen!
If you're reading this review, then I guess you stumbled upon this novel by chance. Let me tell you one thing, fellow daoists: you will definitely regret not reading this novel! Even if you are not used to reading this particular genre, you'll still be immersed in the story because of the author's impeccable writing style.
the novel is pretty good I like the fact that he is like going to fight weird ghost and supernatural stuff and this is based of me only reading the first chapter I hope you don't drop
I don't know how the author does it, but with every passing chapter the story gets better and better. I know a bit more about the story than the crowd here as I'm a beta reader. Still I can't wait for y'all to see what happens in the future.
this is an amazing book read you won't regret it the mc is someone who would do anything for the people he cares about and while he may make mistakes he trys to learn from it all
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1. As you can read from other reviews, the start of the novel is one of the best things I've ever written. But the pace afterwards is a bit sloppy.
2. I was too focused on developing the future plotlines of the story, I forgot to pace it properly, which I took care of immediately after realising my mistake.
3. I can say with surety that things improve later on (as you will see). I just request you to have patience while reading the first volume of the story.
4. the Second volume is where the story picks up and I promise to make it one of my best works ever.
Thanks for reading!