I have not read much yet so take this at face Value. I enjoy the few characters and their personalities that we have been introduced to so far. I also enjoy the plot, although it is not very unique i like where it is going. the only problem i have is that the writing can sound kind of weird like some things been written in present tense when it should have been written in past tense, but it does not bother me much. over all i recommend it
From what i've read (chapter 9 50%)
The general writing and story is quite decent but lacks a few components to really enjoy the novel. That being the fantasy part. It lacks core systems that Are logical and easy to understand such AS instead of might use strength or spirit damage to magic damage also in the world you have set up i see it hard for the character to find trials where they
Get stronger, more information Lore, character development. I see they have quest via the system so this might change but Even then it would lack some small components I think if you add magical realism with a good magic or aura system it would make the story more enjoyable for the reader.
I just started reading and I'm loving it already. Though I question her choice in helping him, I still can't wait to see where this goes. You spin a very good tale. Keep posting.
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The general writing and story is quite decent but lacks a few components to really enjoy the novel. That being the fantasy part. It lacks core systems that Are logical and easy to understand such AS instead of might use strength or spirit damage to magic damage also in the world you have set up i see it hard for the character to find trials where they
Get stronger, more information Lore, character development. I see they have quest via the system so this might change but Even then it would lack some small components I think if you add magical realism with a good magic or aura system it would make the story more enjoyable for the reader.
Mr cagliari has eyes on Ashleigh I'm sure