petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
16chapters but the MC is still trash with no cultivation . he can make pills that is useful why not use them ? bad. hmmm. so bad. . you should have made the MC cultivation around chapters 5+.. NO cultivation = improvement. you are just wasting chapters to make filler or trash story
Here are the reason for my 3 stars- The world background is not clear: it is a modern world or others world since the technology to revive dead is far beyond current time. It is the world of magic ? since everyone try to save MC from tall hill are dying from accident.- be an actor is pointless since there is no main storyline or logic. It is necessary to make actor die every scene? it should change into game or something.- there are many questions that popup such as the film maker can make a profit? since every scene cost life and medicine to cure actor? super power exist why a director need a body guard? when u can revive the dead but still use an old tech such as car or helicopter? no flying car? OK that should be enough.I think there are more question if continue to read.
I think this is a very powerful story line. I'm blown by the detail of what seems to be her experience transitioning it's almost like I was there with her. Great work. Would love to see more. <3
I love this type of story, it kinda remind me of my struggles as a first time mom, the lack of sleep it is true but the joy that you get when you see your baby getting bigger and stronger is the kind of happiness that can't be bought....
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